Monday 6 July 2015

Comedienne MC jenifa writes>>> PAINFUL TEARS 8.

  
DOCTOR: we tried our best but we lost her...
SUSAN: (shouting) noooooooooo miahhhhhh
TANIA: (going out of control but was held tightly by sam) miah,you promised me you will survive (crying so badly)
SAM: (holding tania and susan) please don't do this here
DIEGO: (from afar,to himself) i'm sorry tania,i wish i never see you like this (he went away)
DOCTOR: please i'll arrange ambulance for you now to help you carry the corpse away (he left)
SUSAN: (her eyes turned red from tears) miahhhhh,nooooo,my little angel,oh noooooo
TANIA: (also weeping profusely) it can't be,maih i promised you just today that i'll go to school and you promised me you'll be fine (she fainted and the nurses carried her away)
LIGHT OUT
(diego was seen moving up and down of his room when he heard a knock on his door and sam came in depressed)

SAM: diego,aren't you going to visit them?
DIEGO: i don't know what to do,i can't face tania
SAM: yes you can,you didn't kill miah did you?
DIEGO: no i didn't (a knock at the door) yeah come in
JOHAN: (opened the door) diego
DIEGO: (moved closer to her,hugged her and was crying on her shoulder) johan please help me,i...i...can't face tania
JOHAN: (patting him on his back) its okay diego,that is why i am here. (to sam) are you going to go with us too?
SAM: no,i just arrived from there
JOHAN: has miah been buried?
DIEGO: (still weeping) mom was there when they buried her,she was buried close to their home.
JOHAN: that poor little girl,i feel sorry for her. (releases diego) lets go (they left)
SAM: (confused) something isn't right,why did diego cried like a baby? Why did he hugged johan? Why did johan asked if miah has been buried? (pauses) and why is sam asking rhetorical questions? What will i cook for tania and ma'am susan now,i don't even know how to cook (he left)
LIGHT OUT
(three days after miah's death,susan was sitting outside their home and tania came to meet her)
TANIA: mom?
SUSAN: (looked at tania but did not utter a word)
TANIA: don't do this to yourself,you are the only one i have left in this whole world,if you leave me,i will die one day too and our family's name will die with us.mom,its been three days now and you have refused not to taste anything,please mom,don't do this to yourself,please mom try to eat something.
SUSAN: (held tania's hand) tania,my daughter,this is what poverty has brought to our family,tania i have a secret i want to tell you when the right time comes.
TANIA: and when will the right time come? Mom miah's death is very painful and everything is happening fast,my education dream just died so does miah,pull yourself together mom cos you are the only hope i have left.
SUSAN: your father didn't die a peaceful death,and all this i'll reveal to you only when you are matured enough to fight back,not by killing anyone but with the money you'll have.
TANIA: thanks mom,you still have hope in me (she hugs susan)
LIGHT OUT
(one month later,tania was in diego's house and was with diego at the laundry room)
DIEGO: (helping her do the washing and they were both laughing) tania,you don't mean it?
TANIA: (lauging) yeah it was like www.wayovermyhead.com (they laughed again) so whats the catch diego?
DIEGO: hmmmm,not too bad tho just waiting for you to confess (he giggles)
TANIA: confess? Diego you can't be serious.
DIEGO: (moved closer to tania,held her hand and looked deeply into her eyes,johan was about entering the laundry room when she saw the scenerio and decided to watch,she hid herself) tania,how many time do you have to study the expression on my face? Tania you know i love you and i have told you before now and i know you love me too,i just want to make you my girlfriend and from there,we can get married.
TANIA: (looked at diego but couldn't utter a statement)
DIEGO: tania,if you want this to be a secret between us alone,i promise you i'll keep it,just say yes to my proposal please.
(this time johan couldn't take it anymore and she came inside,tania,freed herself from diego and greeted johan)
JOHAN: tania,mom wants to see you at home as soon as possible
TANIA: okay i'll just finish these clothes as soon as possible
DIEGO: no tania,this is okay,i'll finish them for you
TANIA: (smiled to diego) thanks (she went out
JOHAN: (looked at diego and then smiled) see you later (she followed tania)
LIGHT OUT
(back in johan's house,tania didnt meet zina,johan's mother,but she met mimi,johan's maid)
MIMI: tania,there are some clothes in johan's room,pick them up and wash them as soon as possible.
TANIA: yes (she went to johan's room)
(johan went to meet mimi and asked her if the job is done and she said yes then johan picked up her phone and called the police to come quickly,few minutes later,the police arrived and they went to meet tania where she was)
POLICE 1: we heard a jewelry box got missing,can we have a look at your bag?
TANIA: yeah sure (she gave her bag to the police and he brought out the box)
POLICE 2: you are under arrest...


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